I want to make my theme stronger in a novel. Any hints about that?
Yes, Ann. Many people aren't aware how important theme is...or how many methods there are to show what the theme of a story or novel are. Theme is an element of fiction that includes mood, tone, and voice. Below are some of the ways to work your central theme into your novel.
Theme: Point of the story prompted
by the author’s viewpoint, values, and beliefs.
Theme reflects an opinion, not a fact.
The world is just or unjust, people are basically good or basically bad,
selfish or unselfish, life is random or not. Theme equals the morals at the end
of fables.
*Theme
can be expressed through action & events.
EX: natural disaster, which can present a theme of human frailty or
nature’s indifference to humans. EX: a journey, which equals learning
experiences (Huck Finn on the river & journeying to less racist ideas, Moby
Dick, etc.)
*Theme
can be expressed through symbolism—a literal object that agrees with the theme:
concrete to abstract. EX: a decaying
house representing decaying morals. A
clock ticking in a story about how quickly or slowly time passes.
*Theme
can be expressed through imagery: descriptive & figurative language, &
word choices. EX: adjectives, word
pictures, verb choices. The hero
described as positive and attractive, the villain as the opposite. Verbs that
connote negative or positive meaning—“she slashed at the fragile plants” or
“she pruned away the dead branches.”
*Theme
can be expressed through character. To
find the theme, ask these questions about the main character: Has s/he learned
anything? What? How has this knowledge changed him/her?
Mood – the atmosphere of the
story’s “little world” that combines the effect of the setting, characters,
theme, plot, & dialogue.
Tone – The attitude expressed by
the piece that shows how the author feels using setting, characters, theme,
plot, & dialogue. Sometimes tone
shows how a main character feels, especially if s/he is narrating in 1st
person like an author.
*Setting
choices that influence tone and mood include kind of architecture (castle,
cottage, office bldg.), weather, props (flowers or plants, furnishings,
animals, geologic features, foods, smells, sounds, tastes, textures). Contrasting settings works to emphasize mood
too.
*Character
sets—by evoking reader feelings: dislike, admiration, fear, anger,
sympathy.
*Language
use adds to tone and mood through sentence length: short equals movement and
excitement while long and flowing equals peaceful or hindered feeling. Uncommon sentence structure can be used for
effect—fragments, lists, run-ons.
Vocabulary can create an informal or formal feel. Long, expressive words are about feelings and
emotions while short, simple words are about action. Similes and metaphors evoke feelings. EX:
fragrant as a rose OR carcass of an old car.
Even punctuation, dashes, exclamation points, quotes, can show
tone/mood. EX: to show scorn
sometimes–He felt “poorly.”
Voice – a term used in literary
criticism to identify the sense a written work conveys to a reader of its
writer’s attitude, personality, and character.
As in the case with the closely related term TONE, VOICE reflects the
habit of thinking of writing as a mode of speech. Inexperienced writers are often instructed to
“get more of your own voice into your writing.”
The concept of voice is sometimes compared to Aristotle’s concept of
ethos, the personal image projected by an orator. The main difference I see between voice and
tone is that tone refers to a specific piece and can change between
pieces. EX: Dickens “tone” in The Christmas Carol is angry, while in The Old Curiosity Shop it is sad.
His voice is strongly humanitarian and does not change between pieces
and books, though he chooses to bring it out differently and in varying levels,
depending on the focus of the book. The
Christmas Carol is inspirational and fun while The Old Curiosity Shop is early dystopian or naturalist genre
(where everything ends badly, especially for the main character).
Any more specific questions, Ann?
Let me know and thanks for bringing your question to me at the writers blog!
Ariele
